Today's fanfiction is "my name is Crystal Uley" (and yes, I kept the original capitalization) and is one of millions of Harry Potter/Twilight crossovers found on fanfiction.net. It's not a total trainwreck quite yet, but judging by the summary and the first few lines, it's got the beginnings of one. On the bright side, the punctuation and grammar is almost at a high school level, which is pretty good. Although, judging from the summary, I think the author may have had a bit of help with her editing.
The main character is, shockingly enough, Crystal Uley, daughter of the werewolf Sam from Twilight. Turns out, Embry (another werewolf) has imprinted on her, and these are the adventures that follow...seems fairly okay, until the author throws in that Draco Malfoy is suddenly her BFF. Oh, and she's also an elf, a witch, a mind reader, a shapeshifter, and a soon-to-be-werewolf. Wait, sorry, Princess of the elves. My bad. Mary Sue, anyone?
And that seems to be all there is of this gem for now. Until next time!
The main character is, shockingly enough, Crystal Uley, daughter of the werewolf Sam from Twilight. Turns out, Embry (another werewolf) has imprinted on her, and these are the adventures that follow...seems fairly okay, until the author throws in that Draco Malfoy is suddenly her BFF. Oh, and she's also an elf, a witch, a mind reader, a shapeshifter, and a soon-to-be-werewolf. Wait, sorry, Princess of the elves. My bad. Mary Sue, anyone?
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And that seems to be all there is of this gem for now. Until next time!
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